Fixed #19706 - Tweaks to the tutorial.

Thanks Daniele Procida.

docs/intro/reusable-apps.txt

@@ -50,8 +50,8 @@ projects and ready to publish for others to install and use.
     Python package easy for others to install. It can be a little confusing, we
     know.
 
-Completing your reusable app
-============================
+Your project and your reusable app
+==================================
 
 After the previous tutorials, our project should look like this::
 
@@ -67,78 +67,28 @@ After the previous tutorials, our project should look like this::
             admin.py
             models.py
             tests.py
-            urls.py
-            views.py
-
-You also have a directory somewhere called ``mytemplates`` which you created in
-:doc:`Tutorial 2 </intro/tutorial02>`. You specified its location in the
-TEMPLATE_DIRS setting. This directory should look like this::
-
-    mytemplates/
-        admin/
-            base_site.html
-        polls/
-            detail.html
-            index.html
-            results.html
-
-The polls app is already a Python package, thanks to the ``polls/__init__.py``
-file. That's a great start, but we can't just pick up this package and drop it
-into a new project. The polls templates are currently stored in the
-project-wide ``mytemplates`` directory. To make the app self-contained, it
-should also contain the necessary templates.
-
-Inside the ``polls`` app, create a new ``templates`` directory. Now move the
-``polls`` template directory from ``mytemplates`` into the new
-``templates``. Your project should now look like this::
-
-    mysite/
-        manage.py
-        mysite/
-            __init__.py
-            settings.py
-            urls.py
-            wsgi.py
-        polls/
-            admin.py
-            __init__.py
-            models.py
             templates/
                 polls/
                     detail.html
                     index.html
                     results.html
-            tests.py
             urls.py
             views.py
+        mytemplates/
+            admin/
+                base_site.html
 
-Your project-wide templates directory should now look like this::
-
-    mytemplates/
-        admin/
-            base_site.html
-
-Looking good! Now would be a good time to confirm that your polls application
-still works correctly.  How does Django know how to find the new location of
-the polls templates even though we didn't modify :setting:`TEMPLATE_DIRS`?
-Django has a :setting:`TEMPLATE_LOADERS` setting which contains a list
-of callables that know how to import templates from various sources.  One of
-the defaults is :class:`django.template.loaders.app_directories.Loader` which
-looks for a "templates" subdirectory in each of the :setting:`INSTALLED_APPS`.
+You created ``mysite/mytemplates`` in :doc:`Tutorial 2 </intro/tutorial02>`,
+and ``polls/templates`` in :doc:`Tutorial 3 </intro/tutorial03>`. Now perhaps
+it is clearer why we chose to have separate template directories for the
+project and application: everything that is part of the polls application is in
+``polls``. It makes the application self-contained and easier to drop into a
+new project.
 
 The ``polls`` directory could now be copied into a new Django project and
 immediately reused. It's not quite ready to be published though. For that, we
 need to package the app to make it easy for others to install.
 
-.. admonition:: Why nested?
-
-   Why create a ``polls`` directory under ``templates`` when we're
-   already inside the polls app? This directory is needed to avoid conflicts in
-   Django's ``app_directories`` template loader.  For example, if two
-   apps had a template called ``base.html``, without the extra directory it
-   wouldn't be possible to distinguish between the two. It's a good convention
-   to use the name of your app for this directory.
-
 .. _installing-reusable-apps-prerequisites:
 
 Installing some prerequisites

docs/intro/tutorial01.txt

@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ purely in Python. We've included this with Django so you can develop things
 rapidly, without having to deal with configuring a production server -- such as
 Apache -- until you're ready for production.
 
-Now's a good time to note: DON'T use this server in anything resembling a
+Now's a good time to note: **Don't** use this server in anything resembling a
 production environment. It's intended only for use while developing. (We're in
 the business of making Web frameworks, not Web servers.)
 
@@ -354,7 +354,7 @@ These concepts are represented by simple Python classes. Edit the
     class Choice(models.Model):
         poll = models.ForeignKey(Poll)
         choice_text = models.CharField(max_length=200)
-        votes = models.IntegerField()
+        votes = models.IntegerField(default=0)
 
 The code is straightforward. Each model is represented by a class that
 subclasses :class:`django.db.models.Model`. Each model has a number of class
@@ -377,11 +377,15 @@ example, we've only defined a human-readable name for ``Poll.pub_date``. For all
 other fields in this model, the field's machine-readable name will suffice as
 its human-readable name.
 
-Some :class:`~django.db.models.Field` classes have required elements.
+Some :class:`~django.db.models.Field` classes have required arguments.
 :class:`~django.db.models.CharField`, for example, requires that you give it a
 :attr:`~django.db.models.CharField.max_length`. That's used not only in the
 database schema, but in validation, as we'll soon see.
 
+A :class:`~django.db.models.Field` can also have various optional arguments; in
+this case, we've set the :attr:`~django.db.models.Field.default` value of
+``votes`` to 0.
+
 Finally, note a relationship is defined, using
 :class:`~django.db.models.ForeignKey`. That tells Django each ``Choice`` is related
 to a single ``Poll``. Django supports all the common database relationships:

docs/intro/tutorial02.txt

@@ -399,6 +399,11 @@ That's easy to change, though, using Django's template system. The Django admin
 is powered by Django itself, and its interfaces use Django's own template
 system.
 
+.. _ref-customizing-your-projects-templates:
+
+Customizing your *project's* templates
+--------------------------------------
+
 Create a ``mytemplates`` directory in your project directory. Templates can
 live anywhere on your filesystem that Django can access. (Django runs as
 whatever user your server runs.) However, keeping your templates within the
@@ -446,11 +451,24 @@ override a template, just do the same thing you did with ``base_site.html`` --
 copy it from the default directory into your custom directory, and make
 changes.
 
+Customizing your *application's* templates
+------------------------------------------
+
 Astute readers will ask: But if :setting:`TEMPLATE_DIRS` was empty by default,
 how was Django finding the default admin templates? The answer is that, by
 default, Django automatically looks for a ``templates/`` subdirectory within
-each app package, for use as a fallback. See the :ref:`template loader
-documentation <template-loaders>` for full information.
+each application package, for use as a fallback (don't forget that
+``django.contrib.admin`` is an application).
+
+Our poll application is not very complex and doesn't need custom admin
+templates. But if it grew more sophisticated and required modification of
+Django's standard admin templates for some of its functionality, it would be
+more sensible to modify the *application's* templates, rather than those in the
+*project*. That way, you could include the polls application in any new project
+and be assured that it would find the custom templates it needed.
+
+See the :ref:`template loader documentation <template-loaders>` for more
+information about how Django finds its templates.
 
 Customize the admin index page
 ==============================

docs/intro/tutorial03.txt

@@ -39,7 +39,24 @@ In our poll application, we'll have the following four views:
 * Vote action -- handles voting for a particular choice in a particular
   poll.
 
-In Django, each view is represented by a simple Python function.
+In Django, web pages and other content are delivered by views. Each view is
+represented by a simple Python function (or method, in the case of class-based
+views). Django will choose a view by examining the URL that's requested (to be
+precise, the part of the URL after the domain name).
+
+Now in your time on the web you may have come across such beauties as
+"ME2/Sites/dirmod.asp?sid=&type=gen&mod=Core+Pages&gid=A6CD4967199A42D9B65B1B".
+You will be pleased to know that Django allows us much more elegant
+*URL patterns* than that.
+
+A URL pattern is simply the general form of a URL - for example:
+``/newsarchive/<year>/<month>/``.
+
+To get from a URL to a view, Django uses what are known as 'URLconfs'. A
+URLconf maps URL patterns (described as regular expressions) to views.
+
+This tutorial provides basic instruction in the use of URLconfs, and you can
+refer to :mod:`django.core.urlresolvers` for more information.
 
 Write your first view
 =====================
@@ -52,19 +69,8 @@ and put the following Python code in it::
     def index(request):
         return HttpResponse("Hello, world. You're at the poll index.")
 
-This is the simplest view possible in Django. Now we have a problem, how does
-this view get called? For that we need to map it to a URL, in Django this is
-done in a configuration file called a URLconf.
-
-.. admonition:: What is a URLconf?
-
-    In Django, web pages and other content are delivered by views and
-    determining which view is called is done by Python modules informally
-    titled 'URLconfs'. These modules are pure Python code and are a simple
-    mapping between URL patterns (as simple regular expressions) to Python
-    callback functions (your views). This tutorial provides basic instruction
-    in their use, and you can refer to :mod:`django.core.urlresolvers` for
-    more information.
+This is the simplest view possible in Django. To call the view, we need to map
+it to a URL - and for this we need a URLconf.
 
 To create a URLconf in the polls directory, create a file called ``urls.py``.
 Your app directory should now look like::
@@ -274,10 +280,48 @@ commas, according to publication date::
 
 There's a problem here, though: the page's design is hard-coded in the view. If
 you want to change the way the page looks, you'll have to edit this Python code.
-So let's use Django's template system to separate the design from Python.
+So let's use Django's template system to separate the design from Python by
+creating a template that the view can use.
+
+First, create a directory called ``templates`` in your ``polls`` directory.
+Django will look for templates in there.
+
+Django's :setting:`TEMPLATE_LOADERS` setting contains a list of callables that
+know how to import templates from various sources. One of the defaults is
+:class:`django.template.loaders.app_directories.Loader` which looks for a
+"templates" subdirectory in each of the :setting:`INSTALLED_APPS` - this is how
+Django knows to find the polls templates even though we didn't modify
+:setting:`TEMPLATE_DIRS`, as we did in :ref:`Tutorial 2
+<ref-customizing-your-projects-templates>`.
+
+.. admonition:: Organizing templates
+
+    We *could* have all our templates together, in one big templates directory,
+    and it would work perfectly well. However, this template belongs to the
+    polls application, so unlike the admin template we created in the previous
+    tutorial, we'll put this one in the application's template directory
+    (``polls/templates``) rather than the project's (``mytemplates``). We'll
+    discuss in more detail in the :doc:`reusable apps tutorial
+    </intro/reusable-apps>` *why* we do this.
+
+Within the ``templates`` directory you have just created, create another
+directory called ``polls``, and within that create a file called
+``index.html``. In other words, your template should be at
+``polls/templates/polls/index.html``. Because of how the ``app_directories``
+template loader works as described above, you can refer to this template within
+Django simply as ``polls/index.html``.
+
+.. admonition:: Template namespacing
+
+    Now we *might* be able to get away with putting our templates directly in
+    ``polls/templates`` (rather than creating another ``polls`` subdirectory),
+    but it would actually be a bad idea. Django will choose the first template
+    it finds whose name matches, and if you had a template with the same name
+    in a *different* application, Django would be unable to distinguish between
+    them. We need to be able to point Django at the right one, and the easiest
+    way to ensure this is by *namespacing* them. That is, by putting those
+    templates inside *another* directory named for the application itself.
 
-First, create a directory ``polls`` in your template directory you specified
-in :setting:`TEMPLATE_DIRS`. Within that, create a file called ``index.html``.
 Put the following code in that template:
 
 .. code-block:: html+django
@@ -311,15 +355,9 @@ That code loads the template called  ``polls/index.html`` and passes it a
 context. The context is a dictionary mapping template variable names to Python
 objects.
 
-Load the page in your Web browser, and you should see a bulleted-list
-containing the "What's up" poll from Tutorial 1. The link points to the poll's
-detail page.
-
-.. admonition:: Organizing Templates
-
-    Rather than one big templates directory, you can also store templates
-    within each app. We'll discuss this in more detail in the :doc:`reusable
-    apps tutorial</intro/reusable-apps>`.
+Load the page by pointing your browser at "/polls/", and you should see a
+bulleted-list containing the "What's up" poll from Tutorial 1. The link points
+to the poll's detail page.
 
 A shortcut: :func:`~django.shortcuts.render`
 --------------------------------------------
@@ -536,8 +574,9 @@ view, and so might an app on the same project that is for a blog. How does one
 make it so that Django knows which app view to create for a url when using the
 ``{% url %}`` template tag?
 
-The answer is to add namespaces to your root URLconf. In the
-``mysite/urls.py`` file, go ahead and change it to include namespacing::
+The answer is to add namespaces to your root URLconf. In the ``mysite/urls.py``
+file (the project's ``urls.py``, not the application's), go ahead and change
+it to include namespacing::
 
     from django.conf.urls import patterns, include, url
 

docs/intro/tutorial04.txt

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ A quick rundown:
   ``value`` of each radio button is the associated poll choice's ID. The
   ``name`` of each radio button is ``"choice"``. That means, when somebody
   selects one of the radio buttons and submits the form, it'll send the
-  POST data ``choice=3``. This is HTML Forms 101.
+  POST data ``choice=3``. This is the basic concept of HTML forms.
 
 * We set the form's ``action`` to ``{% url 'polls:vote' poll.id %}``, and we
   set ``method="post"``. Using ``method="post"`` (as opposed to
@@ -199,6 +199,9 @@ Read on for details.
 
     You should know basic math before you start using a calculator.
 
+Amend URLconf
+-------------
+
 First, open the ``polls/urls.py`` URLconf and change it like so::
 
     from django.conf.urls import patterns, url
@@ -225,6 +228,9 @@ First, open the ``polls/urls.py`` URLconf and change it like so::
         url(r'^(?P<poll_id>\d+)/vote/$', 'polls.views.vote', name='vote'),
     )
 
+Amend views
+-----------
+
 We're using two generic views here:
 :class:`~django.views.generic.list.ListView` and
 :class:`~django.views.generic.detail.DetailView`. Respectively, those
@@ -267,9 +273,10 @@ As an alternative approach, you could change your templates to match
 the new default context variables -- but it's a lot easier to just
 tell Django to use the variable you want.
 
-You can now delete the ``index()``, ``detail()`` and ``results()``
-views from ``polls/views.py``. We don't need them anymore -- they have
-been replaced by generic views.
+You can now delete the ``index()``, ``detail()`` and ``results()`` views from
+``polls/views.py``. We don't need them anymore -- they have been replaced by
+generic views. You can also delete the import for ``HttpResponse``, which is no
+longer required.
 
 Run the server, and use your new polling app based on generic views.